DarkPrincss9779
DarkPrincss9779 DarkPrincss9779
  • 13-05-2022
  • English
contestada

help please!!! Highlight the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy.

help please Highlight the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy class=

Respuesta :

jadediviccaro00158
jadediviccaro00158 jadediviccaro00158
  • 13-05-2022

Answer:

" Although meant to ensure student safety and security"

Explanation:

It would be a lot less wordy if you got rid of this phrase. The thesis is supposed to be shorter and get the point across. they could've said metal detectors destroy academic culture and be done.

Answer Link

Otras preguntas

Which of the following best exemplifies the dictatorial tendencies of Porfirio Díaz? A. his use of the military to control all three branches of government B.
how are you suppose to get the %
Ils mangent toujours _____ restaurants du coin A. Aux B.à C.à le
Which of the following decisions would be helped by understanding science? A) Determining your political stance on human rights B) Determining your political st
Evaluate 2a - b for a = 2 and b = 3.
How do you get 66% off of a total? For example like a tax % 7.5?
Which sentences in this excerpt from F. Scott Fitzgerald's "Winter Dreams" show that Dexter’s interest in Judy Jones has more to do with her beauty than her per
A play’s exposition refers to A)its soliloquies. B)its use of imagery. C)its five-part structure. D)its background on plot and characters.
[CM.01] Which states of matter appear only in the hydrosphere?
Karl Marx wrote in The Communist Manifesto that the history of man had been defined by what? class struggle economic inequality natural sel